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This was written for the [community profile] snowflake_challenge day 11 ("create a fanwork").

Title: On Offer
Rating: G
Word Count: 200
Pairing: Jack/Sam

Summary: Something to consider.


On Offer

Sam’s halfway through the standard update – Goa’uld infiltration of Earth, theoretical ways to destroy Anubis, what her robotic evil twin might be up to, same old same old – when the General interrupts.

“Carter?”

“Yes, sir?”

“What would you think about me retiring?”

He’s not looking at her. And she clearly misheard him.

“Say again, sir?”

He meets her gaze, leaning back to sit against the edge of his desk. “If I retired, Sam,” he says evenly. “If it wasn’t a factor. What would happen then?”

A moment’s pause, and then a hundred thoughts hit her simultaneously: I could – we could – does he want to retire? – I’m planning a wedding – Sam, he called me Sam – there wouldn’t be rules against it – does he even mean that? what if I’m misinterpreting? – what would I tell Pete? – he called me Sam – and all she can do is freeze up, push away everything in her brain, and stammer out “I– I don’t know.”

Jack watches her for a second, then nods, and says “Just something I’m thinking about.”


There is no more to the conversation; for the rest of the day they are safe, and official, and everything is simple once again.


Date: 2021-01-21 02:14 pm (UTC)
sjh2009: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sjh2009
Oh yes, I can just see this scene and Sam's brain whirling at nineteen to the dozen.

This is lovely, thank you for sharing :)

Date: 2021-01-21 03:36 pm (UTC)
lightbird: http://coelasquid.deviantart.com/ (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightbird
This is great!

Date: 2021-01-21 04:05 pm (UTC)
debris4spike: Made for me by <user site="dreamwidth.com"user="craterdweller"> (Stargate SG1)
From: [personal profile] debris4spike
Nice

Date: 2021-01-21 04:08 pm (UTC)
pensnest: bright-eyed baby me (I like long words)
From: [personal profile] pensnest
I like it. I can almost 'see' it. Nice.

Date: 2021-01-21 08:56 pm (UTC)
immortalje: Typwriter with hands typing (Default)
From: [personal profile] immortalje
I can pretty much envision the scene. It's lovely :)

Date: 2021-01-22 02:47 pm (UTC)
luthien: (Default)
From: [personal profile] luthien
Nice bit of characterisation for both of them - particularly Sam - and what a telling last line!

Date: 2021-01-22 06:22 pm (UTC)
jedi_of_urth: (daniel glow)
From: [personal profile] jedi_of_urth
Aww, that's nice.

Date: 2021-01-23 12:19 am (UTC)
tielan: (SG1 - SJ1)
From: [personal profile] tielan
Oh yes, that moment where there are so many things in one's head and not all of them can be spoken out loud...

Oh Sam. Oh Jack.

Date: 2021-01-26 09:28 am (UTC)
immer_am_lesen: (Default)
From: [personal profile] immer_am_lesen
Can you write more about/ like this? 'cause I want to read more. :-)

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