schneefink: River walking among trees, from "Safe" (Default)
schneefink ([personal profile] schneefink) wrote in [personal profile] deird1 2020-05-17 11:56 pm (UTC)

Sounds like fun!

Reading the first post I was most concerned about the baby. Why would she take her baby with her, if there are trustworthy people that can take care of her other kids? It would be (presumably) extremely dangerous! So I'd expect there to be a good reason (idk, maybe the baby has magical abilities too and that's why the other guardians can't take care of it, something like that.) I also think it'd be a challenge tension-wise, because I'm not the biggest fan of plot armor but being worried about the baby the entire time would also not be much fun.

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